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Are You Asking
the Right Questions in Your Copy? by Karon Thackston © 2004 http://www.copywritingcourse.com
It's a common approach to
writing copy. You begin by asking questions. Why? To evoke thoughts in your
readers' minds, to stir up emotions, and to get customers thinking in the way
you want them to think. But have you ever thought about how you phrase
your questions? Are you doing it in a way that will have the greatest impact
on your readers or are you just throwing questions on a page?
Behaviorally speaking, not
everybody responds in the same way to the same questions. Those with
different communications styles will relate in a variety of ways depending on
how you phrase your sentence.
Using the DISC Behavioral
Profile, let me explain what I mean and show you how you can start asking the
right questions in the right way to suit your customers.
D = Dominance
Those who fall in the
Dominance category of the DISC profile are described as: in control,
powerful, confident, visionaries, and risk takers. These people can be
managers, CEOs, high-ranking military personnel, entrepreneurs, and the
like.
Those who are considered
high in Dominance want to stick to business. They expect the facts to be
presented logically. They want presentations to be clear, specific, and to
the point.
This group of people will
respond better to specific "what" questions. For example, let's say we're
developing a headline for an ultra-fast printer. You wouldn't want to write a
headline that asks, "How Do You Cure a Need for Speed?" That question
is vague; it's not specific, and it begins with the word "how."
CEOs, upper management, and
others in this category aren't the least bit interested in "how" you do
anything. They are visionaries. They look at the big picture, not the
little details. Details are somebody else's job!
Instead, try rewriting that
headline to include the word "what" and to be specific, like this: "What
Cures a Need for Speed?"
You can see a similar
relation in other behavioral styles (I, S, and C) and the types of questions
people in each prefer.
I = Influence
Those high in Influence are
generally found in the sales field or other fields that require a lot of
people/social interaction. They move fast and want to focus on
people-oriented tasks. They love to give their opinions and to be asked for
their thoughts on a matter. They love to be the center of
attention.
This group responds well to
"feeling" questions. Not just about themselves, but also about others. For
example: "Remember the excitement you felt when _____?" or "How would your
child feel if _____?"
S = Steadiness
Those in the Steadiness
group want to be seen as people - not a number. They appreciate logic, a
touch of personal interaction, and they are detail-oriented. They are
generally slow decision-makers and are not wild about taking unqualified
risks. Those who fall into the Steadiness category make up 40% of
the general population and come from all walks of life.
People high in steadiness
would be likely to respond better to questions beginning with "how."
Possibilities include "How many times have you wished ____?" or "How often do
you ____?" They also respond well to questions that make them think, like
"Is your copy getting results?" They'll likely want to know what you can
do about it if the answer is "no."
C = Compliance
When describing someone who
falls into the Compliance category, these phrases come to mind: critical
thinker, prepared, quality-oriented, incredibly detailed, specific, and
slow decision-maker. You'll generally find these types working
as engineers, bankers, accountants, scientists, and the like.
Those high in Compliance
will respond best to questions including statistics and questions that force
them to look at all sides of an issue/problem. For example, "68% of All
Drivers Pay Too Much for Auto Insurance. Are You?" Another idea is "Widget
or Thingee. Which Makes the Most Sense?"
Phrasing your questions in a
way that allows your target customers to relate only makes sense. When you
hit a nerve -people will respond. Asking the right questions. in the
right way. within your copy will get you one step closer to closing
the sale.
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